My subject today is selling horses. What part of selling don't people get? I have seen TOOOO many bad sale ads. Proper ads describe the horses breed, age, discipline/training & personality. Plus has proper punctuation, grammar, & spelling! Plus, contact info. If you put contact info in the ad, you get more responds
Here is my dream horse's ad(one I made up):
I have a bay Hanoverian mare for sale. She is a blood bay and measures at 16.2hh. Her barn name is Tina. She is drop-dead gorgeous with proven success in halter & showmanship. Her conformation is fabulous! She stands well for farrier, grooming, ect. She loads well, also. She gets along with other horses. I worked her mainly in dressage for the past year & a little hunter/jumper. She can jump a 2'6" course at home but hasn't been show in hunter/jumper. She is excelling in dressage. She is showing training level & loves it. When she is in the ring, she is unbelievable! She never fails at showing me why I love her! She is still young & is looking for someone to take her in ANY direction.
Call BLAH or email at BLAH
Bye for now,
L
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